Prologue- not

Ok, so I really want to share more with you all about my book BUT, i cant really give the details out yet. Gotta keep it under wraps, you know? So, being the nice person I am, I wrote a little bit more of what could go in the prologue, following what i had already posted.
Below, you will find the regular prologue and in bold is what would come next. If you wanna take a jab at what it is all about, knock yourself out :)

Hope you enjoy it!

"I knew what was happening even if I didn’t know the reason why. I was falling, it was unmistakable. Surely I must have hoped loud enough they had actually heard me, but what did this mean? The air moved around me with great velocity but as I glanced around me, instead everything moved with such delicacy.
What ever would I do once I arrived? Will I even remember this past life? I closed my eyes and resigned myself to the feeling of peace the wind beneath brought to me. Soon enough it will all be over.


I finally reached the ground. The descent had left me feeling such pleasure, I wanted to fall some more, but this was where I had to be. A wave of energy spread back and forth across my skin as each cell began its transformation. This was how I was being born. I opened my eyes momentarily and glanced around at the colorful world. The trees stood tall, casting shadows like great carpets unrolled from their bases. The sky was above me, like a dome closed over a music box I was carefully placed in. I had never seen anything more beautiful, or had I? I shook my head, as if the haziness would be cleared into focus again. What was happening to me? In fact, where was I?
I took a few steps trying to balance myself on a fallen tree trunk. I wasn’t used to walking on these feet. I looked down wiggling the toes. With a smile I realized it was going to be an exciting ride."



Again, the part in BOLD letters doesn't go in the book, i just simply made it up to give you all another taste of it :)
Your thoughts are greatly appreciated!

XOXO

I shouldn't do this

I know I REALLY should not do this, but I am excited to hear from everyone what you think of the draft of my prologue.

Here it goes:

"I knew what was happening even if I didn’t know the reason why. I was falling. It was unmistakable. Surely I must have hoped loud enough they had actually heard me, but what did this mean? The air moved around me with great velocity but as I glanced around me, instead, everything moved with such delicacy.
What ever would I do once I arrived? Will I even remember this past life? I closed my eyes and resigned myself to the feeling of peace the wind beneath brought to me. Soon enough it will all be over."


©Lucy Swing/ Feathermore4life

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A little tease to get everyone wondering, let me know what you guys think!

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