What lurks in the Darkness

I took a little break from writing for the book and just decided to write whatever came to my mind, and after revising once, this is what I produced.

“The echoing of my own screams were deafening. Couldn’t he hear it? We once were so connected, two bodies sharing the same soul. I tried to take a step forward, my arms stretched. The darkness had finally enveloped itself around me. The pain felt it could easily shatter every ounce of my being if I gave in to it completely. The agony was piercing, but I wouldn’t allow it to claim me, not when I knew he was out there. I knew he was seeking, but would he find me in time?

I tried to feel my way around but all there was was the blackness. Infinite darkness; the same that had once been my life, before he had come along and erased every trace of it off of my mind. But now, here I was. There was no escaping it this time, but I still clung to the hope he would find a way. He must. I just had to hold on, just a little bit more, before it swallowed me whole.”
©Lucy Swing
©Feathermore4life

What do you all think? Who knows- maybe one day I will make this an actual story!
Well, it is 4:12am and I need some sleep.. Kids will most likely be up by 7:30..

Have a good night!

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